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Re: My Brother and Sister in law
Thanks for the great story bro.
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Re: My Brother and Sister in law
Thanks bro for a great story. Hooked till the end! And a great twist.
Looking forward to more other stories |
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Re: My Brother and Sister in law
Bro ILOCK..
Thanks for this.. I've been checking the thread everyday and looking to read this ending so much. very good writing and the story tugs at my heart strings with every read. Looking forward to reading more from you. |
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Re: My Brother and Sister in law
Excellent story. Hope james wont be in the footstep of joe
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Re: My Brother and Sister in law
abosolutely brilliant!!
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Re: My Brother and Sister in law
Great story.. great ending!!!
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Ah TGIF! Great read for a great friday
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Re: My Brother and Sister in law
fantastic ending
looking forward to your next work |
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Even the finish is beautiful. It's as though he had a script and made amendments along the way and planned for this ending
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Re: My Brother and Sister in law
Bro ilikeoldchangke, thanks for the story... really hope u don't end this story...
ease in & out plus shoot abalone raw in Sylvia must b the no.1 best thing... Quote:
may b Trilogy... hope to hear from u ASAP... Quote:
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Re: My Brother and Sister in law
love the ending... hopefully I am able.to do equally good with my own stories in Indonesia
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Re: My Brother and Sister in law
Cheers bro, for the well thought and written story
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Re: My Brother and Sister in law
The last chapter is awesome...hahaha!
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Wow.. Finally ended.. Ha ha.. How I wish you are continue with your SIL.. hee....
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Re: My Brother and Sister in law
thank you bro ilock for another wonderfully written story. now got to go cold turkey until your next story!
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