I was Naive (Story)

[tungsten]

ok bro
chillax first and peace
suke of deer montain is a classic and what u wrote here is being compared to a classic literary. The chart of comparison itself is a positive acknowledgment if your writing powers.
the above chart is just to show my personal interpretation of the wives and your characters... Impossible to poll all the bros here one by one right?
Anyway since you ask, here is the reason for the fit
Again peace and no offence meant in any manner. The long chart is just from wiki to provide ppl with the reason for link if never read the books before.

sonia - most innoncent of the lot thus is 沐劍屏
Jasmine - most smart and independent minded and fhus Fang Yi
Felicia - Most understandung and devoted like Shuang'er
Chrisitna - Oldest and worldy like Su Quan
Priscila - Psychotic like Princess Jianning
Joanne - Used to be the main target of TS before shifted to others... thus think she is prettiest like A'ke
Anne - most polite and cultured like Zeng Rou

[theEveningStar]

Yeah imagine Jasmine talk dirty to yang in powerful English when she take his member in fully. Omggggg

[LateHunter]

I can understand starter bro, you are derailing from his story, if u like to start a new story, please create in a new thread.

Most of us know 鹿鼎记, but why create new characters for someone else's story?

Originally Posted by tungsten

ok bro
chillax first and peace
suke of deer montain is a classic and what u wrote here is being compared to a classic literary. The chart of comparison itself is a positive acknowledgment if your writing powers.
the above chart is just to show my personal interpretation of the wives and your characters... Impossible to poll all the bros here one by one right?
Anyway since you ask, here is the reason for the fit
Again peace and no offence meant in any manner. The long chart is just from wiki to provide ppl with the reason for link if never read the books before.

sonia - most innoncent of the lot thus is 沐劍屏
Jasmine - most smart and independent minded and fhus Fang Yi
Felicia - Most understandung and devoted like Shuang'er
Chrisitna - Oldest and worldy like Su Quan
Priscila - Psychotic like Princess Jianning
Joanne - Used to be the main target of TS before shifted to others... thus think she is prettiest like A'ke
Anne - most polite and cultured like Zeng Rou

[tungsten]

Not meant as derailing but more of linking since the wei xiaobao comment has been bought up repeatedly.

Creating new characters? My writng not so powerful to do so.

Really meant it as a positive remark and regret that it is interpret otherwise. Apologise to bro starter for making u to be distress over the issue.

[houses100]

hope bro Starter comes back.. your story is very good, waiting to know what happens..

[ibanezjem555]

Every woman is in some way innocent, smart, independent minded, most understanding, devoted, worldy, psychotic, pretty (in their own way), polite and cultured.. like one sitting by the sofa in the same room opposite me now. Everywhere got link.. but can good at s**king c**k or not ?
I never see this story before (maybe because I naive.. ha ha.. or no experience). Stories I heard is so tame and lame, not so detail like Bro TS.

This story is set in S'pore, with S'pore flavour and authentic feel, with girls we have come across before or in some way we wanted to approach but no guts to, or seen and talked to before but never in bedroom..

Bro TS Starter, continue leh.. still waiting to see what happen to that hand grenade.

[Starter]

Originally Posted by ibanezjem555

Every woman is in some way innocent, smart, independent minded, most understanding, devoted, worldy, psychotic, pretty (in their own way), polite and cultured.. like one sitting by the sofa in the same room opposite me now. Everywhere got link.. but can good at s**king c**k or not ?
I never see this story before (maybe because I naive.. ha ha.. or no experience). Stories I heard is so tame and lame, not so detail like Bro TS.

This story is set in S'pore, with S'pore flavour and authentic feel, with girls we have come across before or in some way we wanted to approach but no guts to, or seen and talked to before but never in bedroom..

Bro TS Starter, continue leh.. still waiting to see what happen to that hand grenade.

Let me calm down first, I cant write shit now. you better check tml you boss face black of not maybe it's me

[ibanezjem555]

Also request to Bro TS Starter or other Bros, can create a montage of all of Lawerence's girls (yes, there were some which Bro TS picked in their likeness).

Compile over time and put in one picture (with names below each girl) for all of us.. ok la, me only la .. my selfish interest.. to lao nuah !
[But must be girls that Bro TS Starter pick only]

Once in a while put it up in this thread to remind us or for me to nose bleed .. ha ha ..

[ibanezjem555]

Waahh haaa haaa..

Bro TS, you cannot be my boss because I match your update timings..

When you update he was in office meeting his boss.. so I know I safe !! LoL !

[Starter]

This is Jasmine's lookalike actually wanted to keep till release of Ebook but here goes

[ibanezjem555]

Gulp ! Wah lao.. reminds me of one of those girls I wanted to approach but no guts to !!

[ibanezjem555]

Bro TS Starter or other Bros, repost pictures of Lawrence's girls for compilation side by side in one picture. Thanks

[Starter]

Originally Posted by ibanezjem555

Bro TS Starter or other Bros, repost pictures of Lawrence's girls for compilation side by side in one picture. Thanks

I doing the full relationship chart lah give me some time

[Kas26]

More more moreee pleaseee

[ibanezjem555]

You definitely not my Boss, because he not so organised with schematics and chart... lai lai.. pictures first so that I can nose-bleed !
Now, I go search the pages for the pix of girls.. got mission..