I was Naive (Story)

[Brogary]

I'm so addicted. Everyday after work, I immediately log into SBF, adult discussions about sex, always hoping the I was naive story would be in dark bold blue, no matter how many updates it's never enough to satisfy my lust for ur story TS! Carry on the good work man! Cheers!

[banger_boy]

Me everyday surfing net but keep this page refreshed.
Used the apple handoff function and transferrered to my phone whlist going for golf.
At the 1st hole, i showed my golfing partner and he ask me to send him the link.
Game abandoned after 3rd hole.
Cos he kept reading and i kept refreshing.
1st time ended the game in less than an hour.
Spent the rest of the day in the club mess refreshing.
4pm drove home and handoff back to mac.
Until now still refreshing.

TS is a very good narrator.
Very well written and the juices and saucy bits are well balanced.

Thats what kept me going.

[soulkesi88]

Great story Keep it coming

Will be camping here for more

[Starter]

I went down to the void deck and I could not forgive myself, I started to recall how Christina and I got together, how much she has done for me risking the fact that the girls would know, and how much negative thoughts I throw on her.

I punched on the wall and it was painful, I was hoping that pain will not let me feel the piercing pain in my heart. I sat on the mosaic seats at the void deck holding my head asking myself what have I done.

I knew nothing much can be done and I left Christina a voicemail.

My Voicemail to Christina: I was wrong and I know i was stupid, but i hope you can just see things from my end. I was afraid of losing you, I am sorry.

I ended my message and i did not know what more i could do i walked to the station and took a train, nothing but the past with Christina filled my mind, I stood by the door of the MRT looking outwards, I lean my head forward on the glass panel and occasionally banging onto it.

Reaching Bishan and walking home never seem such a long journey, at times i will whine like a baby with ppl looking at me. I did not care!

Reaching home my pager beep, I took the phone and listen as i somehow knew it was Christina.

Christina Voicemail: Give me some time, I need time to think about us (crying)

I laid on the bed with a wet pillow that night looking at the photo in the moonlight on one hand and constantly pressing and replaying her message on the other.

[Ntspannar]

Lol TS u really quite stupid leh the way u handle Christina. No offense...but I would like lots of bad karma for u by the way u actually treat the girls

But do carry on the story. Takes a good story to create emotions positive or negative

[hiccup]

Very good story, camping for update

[WingChun]

liked the update TS

[98188729]

Originally Posted by Starter

About an hour after we started the tutoring session, Jasmine and Ann's Parents came back. their parents were office workers or so I thought dressing nicely in office attire, Jasmine and Ann Greeted them as we followed behind.

Me: Hi Uncle, Hi Auntie.

Jasmine and Ann's father seemed friendly, he took a look at Felicia and me and turned to Jasmine.

Jasmine and Ann's Father: So these are the students allocated for you girls to tutor under the program?

Jasmine: Yes, The poor and needy student program.

Hahahaha this jasmine really wtf. But this chapter dam funny. Shiok ah all the updates. Keep going bro

[Starter]

I woke up the next morning, I felt a part of me is lost. the previous excitement of receiving my result after all these efforts started to mean nothing to me.

I received a voicemail just before leaving home, it was a voicemail and i listened to it

Christina Voicemail: I still love you, and we need to talk, i will page you ok?

I bend my knees and squat on the floor: Thank You Christina,Thank you...

I left Christina a voicemail telling her that i will be waiting and i was sorry.

I felt things were turning for the better, on the bus i was thinking. It was not only about Christina, but of all the girls, there was affection for each of them. even Jasmine. I started to believe that i would have felt the same way i did last night if any of them were to leave me. On the bus i mouthed out "I love you all, I really do".

During classes, It was a day which most will be anticipating and yet feared. The teachers took turns to enter our classrooms handing out the test papers, reminding us to bring the papers for their lessons to check the answers.

Every time i collected mine i will just hold the paper on my chest and i did not look at them, finally it was the last paper to be handed out. I took all my papers and looked at the top right corner one by one.

Not only did i passed i managed to get As on 3 of my papers, and one of them was my dreaded Maths.

I did not show anyone my papers not even Ah Kai, whom did badly and sitting at his place looking through his papers.

But that happiness was not there to stay as I was called to the Principal's office after Recess.

At the office, the principal briefed me that i was suspected of cheating as my grades proved irregular, my form teacher was the one that reported the so call Irregularity.

Me: Mr Tan, (Principal) I get good marks then say i cheat, Like that cannot lah. ( In my heart i was thinking the school was behaving like a illegal gambling den, refusing payout when someone win big)

Mr Tan: Listen to us Yang, we are just suspecting. If you can proof that you have not cheated then all will be fine.

Mr Vanan (my Math and form teacher) told me that i needed to retake a test in the office.

Me: Ok, you want me to proof i proof.

Mr Vanan handed me a set of test paper and a pen, i did the paper in front of my principal, Which i finished in an hour's time.

After Mr Vanan, marked my paper, I got a higher score as compared to my initial paper.

Mr Tan: Ok Yang you have proven you did not cheat, you can go back to class now.

I went back to the class i did not know how the class knew about it but there were rumours saying i was called to the office because I had cheated in my exams.

I took my bag and left the classroom going straight to the Principal's office.

Me: Mr Tan, now the whole class say i cheat. Soon the whole school will say i cheat. How?

Mr Tan: Yang, We cannot control what ppl want to say right as long as you are innocent then it's ok.

Me: it's not ok, I need Mr Vanan to tell everyone it is his mistake. The school also tell us we do wrong thing must admit right?

Saying that i left the office and exited the school walking out of the school gate, I sat at the bus stop to calm myself down. I took a bus home, despite the unhappiness in the school I left Christina a voicemail telling her my results.

[Starter]

Originally Posted by banger_boy

Me everyday surfing net but keep this page refreshed.
Used the apple handoff function and transferrered to my phone whlist going for golf.
At the 1st hole, i showed my golfing partner and he ask me to send him the link.
Game abandoned after 3rd hole.
Cos he kept reading and i kept refreshing.
1st time ended the game in less than an hour.
Spent the rest of the day in the club mess refreshing.
4pm drove home and handoff back to mac.
Until now still refreshing.

TS is a very good narrator.
Very well written and the juices and saucy bits are well balanced.

Thats what kept me going.

Wah your Caddy must be very happy, Anyway thanks for sharing my story and the positive comments

[ris2099]

TS, your story put me in an emotional roller coaster ride. I expect the finale would rekt me... But nevertheless a very good story. Came for the sex, stayed for the plot.

[ibanezjem555]

Bro TS,

You are an amazing story writer ! I am glued to this story. The insight into Spore culture, gang relationships and your reference to Spore icons like Ang Mo Kio blk, parks, Yaohan, J8, Literature Read and other landmarks makes it all the more enduring.

Ever thought of making your story into an AV serial with AV girls playing the roles. If you embark on this, we can crowd-fund and I don't mind volunteer to be your Casting Panel.. ha ha...

Which Bro think this is a good idea - Kee Chiu !

Keep the story flowing !

Rock On Bro

[Starter]

I changed into my home clothes and rested on the bed as I did not sleep much last night. I was almost falling asleep when my pager beeped I took a look as there was a voicemail, I Ignored it as I succumbed to the comfort of my bed. my pager beep twice again continuously, and I pulled myself to the cordless phone in the living room.

I checked my voicemail and there were 3 messages

Christina's Voicemail: Good that you have done so well, I did not do well and I have quitted my job.

Felicia: Eh Idiot, my Ang mo (English) got B leh!! how you do ah, see you at J8 later.

Jasmine: Eh Servant, ready to show me your sea of red, we meet at Bishan MRT in 20 Mins?

I guess I got into a better mood as Christina had replied my messages regularly, It seems she is no longer upset.

I went to my room and was yawning as I took my papers and placed them in a folder, after which I proceeded to Bishan MRT to meet Jasmine and Ann.

When I reached the station, Jasmine and Ann was already waiting there.

Seeing Jasmine will always let me think of something new, I decided to play a prank on her again. I walked towards the sisters look dejected and was sighing.

Jasmine: Why are you in home clothes?

Me: Don't say lah.

Jasmine: Don't tell me you never get your papers from school today.

Me: I got them... I held up the folder, Sighing hard.

Jasmine: ok let me see.

Me: No... I let Ann see first... Sorry Ann I think I did not do as well.

Jasmine was having this smirk, she must be confident that she has won the bet between us.

Ann: it's ok, we still have till end of the year

I turn to Ann and handed her the folder, as she was taking it from me I held on it tightly causing a little resistance. Ann looked at me and I smiled lightly winking at her, hoping that she could get my signal.

Ann took the folder and looked through my papers, I prevented Jasmine from joining her.

Me: Say already let Ann see first what.

Ann shook her head: So careless. but the result is indeed not what I expected.

Ann placed the papers back into the folder and passed it to Jasmine.

I started to walk away from Jasmine and Ann followed me, as Jasmine took out the papers.

We giggled and walked faster.

Jasmine: Lawrence you nincompoop!!!

We laughed hard at Jasmine's reaction and Jasmine started chasing me around the station trying to hit me with the folder. Felicia saw Ann as she alighted the bus stop beside the station, she asked Ann what happened, Ann Smiled and told Felicia: Lawrence passed.

[Starter]

After running and avoiding Jasmine's "attack", I stopped and i was running out of breath.

Jasmine hitting me with the folder: How dare you lie to me. (panting due to the run)

Me: Okok enough already (still laughing)

She ignored me and carried on hitting me, I raised my hand an held onto hers firmly.

Me: I won right? I will tell you when I need a servant.

Jasmine gave me a whatever gesture and we joined up with Felicia and Ann.

Felicia was proudly holding her English paper showing us that she has got a B, The girls decided we should celebrate the good results we had and Felicia suggested my home, which I was not really hyped about, to be honest I was sleepy due to the lack of sleep the previous night.

But we still went ahead and bought lotsa food and some drinks up my home, we started the "Feast" and I did not eat much, I told the girls to finish the food and I went back to the comfort of my bed. I rest and laid sideways facing the wall, closing my eyes in a bid to gather some rest.

I was drifting into a sleeping mood as I felt a peck on my cheek, I could hear Felicia and Jasmine talking outside so i knew it was Ann, I reached and pulled her onto the bed and hugged her.

Me: Thanks Ann.

Ann: that's for the good work.

We kissed and I reached to caress her breast, It was tough and rubbery. I knew she had bind her breast that day and stopped caressing it. We kissed for a brief 3 mins or so and she gently push me off.

Ann: You rest, I go out first

I released her and I nodded my head, Ann went out and i started to slowly fall asleep.

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